I am a place where the mountain goat
dwells,
A place with many stone wells.
A place
where a river starts,
And really
early the day departs.
I know it’s
5 when the cock starts crowing,
And it’s 6
when men go rowing.
They row as
noiselessly as a thief
While women
at home are cooking beef.
I know it’s
7 when I hear mothers giving calls,
To little
children in overalls.
It’s 8 when
children go to school,
And men come
home and start to drool.
To drool at
the beef made,
By the ones
they treat as maids.
I know it’s 9 when men go to the markets,
While women
at home weave jute baskets
Then I spend
time with my momma,
You may know
her as flora and fauna.
I take care
of her in her old age,
Since humans
destroy her for a daily wage.
I admire her
eternally changing beauty,
And she
praises me, for fulfilling my duty.
I am amused by the play of her frogs and crocs,
And she
likes my children playing in shoes and socks.
Then before
I know it, the sun goes to bed,
And the moon
comes out with a balding head.
I wish I could wish my humans a
’night
’cause they
fill me up with life and light.
At night not
a mountain goat dwells,
No one goes
to visit the stone wells.
But the
river keeps flowing down the slope,
While humans
sleep like they have had a dope.
So proud of you my son! Very well written. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteI am pleasantly surprised to see this talent :) very colorfully written and biggest of all I am happy to see he see these minute things and they are staying in his mind :)
ReplyDeleteThat was a beautiful expression of his observations n perceptions. Way to go Vishu! Keep writing. N please keep sharing too. - Aunty Ancie
ReplyDeleteA lovely piece Vishnu...and this actually proves how observant you are of your surroundings. I can see the town through your words. Keep it up... :-)
ReplyDeleteAmazing talent and awareness. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!! Takes you to another place and time :)
ReplyDeleteWell done Vishnu .. You've taken us to your age .. Superbly expressed .. Specially loved the lines .. "Then I spend time with my momma,
ReplyDeleteYou may know her as flora and fauna.
I take care of her in her old age,
Since humans destroy her for a daily wage."
Keep it up .. :)
Good work... Keep it up Vishnu ��
ReplyDeleteReally wowwww Vishnu ! The expression, the depth of observation, the rhyming is all so well knitted together as feelings of a town ! Beautifully personified!
ReplyDeleteGod bless you. Keep writing. Every word is speaking itself.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful. Krsna bless u.
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